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all the hues of blue every single shade none come to my aid not a one can define that color sublime when your eyes linger on me I bathe in ecstasy Azure pools, molten fire eyes a shade of desire words will never do not a single tint of blue captures the beauty that is you the color of your eyes darker streaks through the light like moods that you feel how they flow and recede baby blue flecks of teal just one look and I reel your soul shines on through all the hues of your blue All my indigo dreams by the cool cobalt streams are a reflection so true of your eyes of clear blue the kaleidoscope fades only this one remains this color of blue in my world of just you.... Eileen Manassian

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/5/2016 5:39:00 AM

"Azure pools, molten fire eyes a shade of desire" Blue is an immensely gorgeous eye color. I love the words you use...the fourth stanza is dripping with awesomeness. ^^ Great one! Always, Laura

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/5/2016 2:06:00 PM

Thank you, Laura....My fascination with blue eyes has stayed with me since childhood. There was a handsome neighbor boy....jet black hair...sky blue eyes. What can I say? He took my breath away...I've loved blue eyes ever since....Thanks for the visit.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/2/2016 8:56:00 AM

Hi Eileen...your 'blue' comes across as a very smooth and natural pouring of words which are especially effective because of what you call "simple words". This is romantic and beautiful, so thumbs up to the "simple gal with simple words"!:) Hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/5/2016 2:07:00 PM

Dear Paul...thank you for your visit to my Blue eyes poem. I appreciate your words and sentiments. You know you are dear to Appassionata. You are ever faithful in your visits and for one visit...you visit thrice over. Bless you. :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/2/2016 8:41:00 AM

It's good to be blue, especially when described by you. He's a very handsome fellow.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/5/2016 2:08:00 PM

Thank you for your visit to my Blue poem, Richard. I am partial to blue eyes. Have always been. You have very beautiful eyes as well. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2016 3:20:00 PM

Awesome love poem. The eyes HAVE IT. I have loved guys both brown eyed and blue. Can't recall any with green, though that is my own eye color. Blue/green seeming sometimes nearly grey! This was wonderful, Eileen.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/5/2016 2:09:00 PM

Green is beautiful as well. When there is love in the eyes...any color comes shining through. :) Blessings.

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/29/2016 6:13:00 PM

My eyes are green. Does that do anything for you? What a write for blue eyes. This is a terrific write, Eileen.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/5/2016 2:10:00 PM

Green eyes are beautiful as well. :) Thanks for the visit.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/29/2016 3:43:00 PM

I saw you mentioned Pierce Btosnan..I really like the Brosnan guy : )..This poem is beautiful Eileen..filled with fsntadtic vocsbulary...Love the indigo dreams so much.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/29/2016 3:46:00 PM

Thanks, dear. It's not for the contest. People outdid themselves for that. I'm a simple gal...simple words. Thanks for the visit.

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/29/2016 2:57:00 PM

Gee's Louise! Is that all you gals think about...Great write

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/29/2016 4:33:00 PM

Not entering it....Wrote it just for the heck of it cause I like blue eyes.

Charlie Smith
Date: 2/29/2016 3:02:00 PM

Just kidding. Should be a winner!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/29/2016 2:58:00 PM

:) Not all....no, but "eyes are the windows to the soul." Thanks for the visit.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/29/2016 2:42:00 PM

- ................ nothing to say on these beautiful eyes .... :))) - infatuated .....in blue ..... :)) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/29/2016 2:48:00 PM

:) That's David Gandy....The best British male model......I was going to post Pierce Brosnon as well. Always been partial to blue eyes...Thanks for the visit, Sunshine. Hugs to you, sweetie.