Blue

The blue of the sky and the blue of the ocean tried to compete with the sapphire blue of your eyes, but failed,only I know it! =====================

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John Freeman

Date: 12/17/2011 11:33:00 AM

Thanks for the honor of reading your worthy poetry, Have a Happy Holiday and New Year, agape, Moses

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/17/2011 4:17:00 AM

Nice one Kash . Congratulaions. happiness to you and yours x

Bob Quigley

Date: 12/16/2011 10:38:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Kash

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/16/2011 1:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Retread" contestKash . Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/11/2011 1:41:00 PM

Just read your entry, I love it!!!! open invite my dear...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/23/2011 12:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Francine Roberts's contest "Blue". A well deserved win Kashinath. Love, Carol

Joe Inka

Date: 2/13/2011 5:29:00 PM

Great write my friend. That's as smooth as it gets

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/12/2011 10:50:00 AM

thank you so much for reading it :) hope you're having a great weekend :)

Gert W. Knop

Date: 2/12/2011 8:44:00 AM

Very nice one and my congrats on your win! Thank you for your kind comment and have a nice Sunday!....Tc...Gert

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/11/2011 5:34:00 PM

soft smile, young love! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Joshua Lacey

Date: 2/11/2011 12:46:00 PM

the soul sure is prettier than anything nature can conjure, great poem :)

George Aul

Date: 2/11/2011 8:38:00 AM

Nice win in the contest....Thanks for the comment........George

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/11/2011 7:43:00 AM

Congrats Kashinath on your super win in the blue contest with this fabulous entry my friend.. enjoy another sweet victory with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2011 10:17:00 PM

Wow, Kash, I am so happy to see you on the winners' list. WAY TO GO, my good friend! Luv, Andrea

Julie Heckman

Date: 2/10/2011 8:39:00 PM

Love tanka and this one is very lovely Julie

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/10/2011 7:50:00 PM

Simply beautiful. many congratulations.

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/10/2011 7:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest with this fine entry. I wonder why I didn't see this one earlier?

John Freeman

Date: 2/10/2011 3:39:00 PM

Congratulations Kashinath on your honored placement. Agape, Moses

Brandee Augustus

Date: 2/10/2011 2:10:00 PM

Nice! I think this is a perfect poem for a valentine. Congratulations on writing a winning poem.

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/10/2011 1:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your great win in Francine's "Blue" Contest, Kashinath! Love, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/10/2011 12:15:00 PM

I knew this would be a winner, Kashinath. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Kory Calhoun

Date: 2/10/2011 12:09:00 PM

Loved this one! - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/10/2011 11:24:00 AM

yes, yes yo!! super write, kashi with winning laurels to you.. congrats!! :) huggs, nette

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/10/2011 11:09:00 AM

Hello Kashinath, Ahh what a lovely thought you have penned here. Congratulations on your much deserved win... As Always, Shar

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/10/2011 10:51:00 AM

ah no contest indeed! Very sweet tanka you have here Kashinath-- sorry I missed this earlier-- but happy to read this now-- congrats on being in the top 10 :)