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* This has become a fave genre for me, as I’ve always been fascinated by metamorphosis and introspection of a shadowy nature … I hope you enjoy it. * ~ ruin of me … what was once a bloom of promise has become a wilderness of horrors all for the sake of your pearly light, strewn that cornflower eye that you open wide but once a month … in my wistful youth, I dreamt of your enchantments - what dark-edged demon were you looking for that needed the bright of your full gaze? you, a black-skinned cyclops searching this orb for the spell might set it free … was that it, I mused? each full face of the moon - were you hoping for your liberty and occasion to dance with the stars? how could I have known in my callow curiosity? how could I have envisaged such a diabolical truth? it was ME you were searching for - the chance to turn my blood to molten metal my teeth to daggers and my body to a fiend of the moors - twisted, powerful as an oak and thirsting for flesh … you, Luna are the pearl of night - the maiden of mysteries and magic, dark the recreant lover of lycanthropy - bane of my breath and sweet salt of my doom ages-times-ages ago the vernal lad I was wandered the high fells, lost - dropped sleeping under a copse of cedars and awakened to the gentle bite of a broad, beautied canid (your maidservant) sable, with eyes of fire opal the blue sheen of your vaulted gaze daubing her fur like dew … she had no intent of devouring me no sense of animus at all just PURPOSE - purpose beyond my grasp but the wait to discover just that, was not long … now - now you stare like a harlot these rare nights just to see my monstrosity - to behold the wonder of your accursed creation - the genesis of genocide and guilt that pierced the heart of a wee boy of chastity rife with hope and promise then charred his dreamy aspirations with veins of fire and a conflagration of his marrow … I … am the damned … in your sight - your blue-eyed midnight - is where the man of me ends and the beast begins you, passion’s pain who stirred my stripling soul robbed me of my god and flames my coursings … even now. For the “1258 New Poem Only Poetry Contest”, Brian Strand Judge/Sponsor.

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Date: 11/18/2023 9:06:00 AM
Powerful write. Soul hitting metaphors and depth in every word woven in such a descriptively dark manner. Well deserved win, congratulations
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/18/2023 5:40:00 PM
Thank you so kindly, IE, that really means a lot to me … my involvement here has been minimal of late, so I don’t get many comments, and thoughtful ones like yours mean all the more. I haven’t been able to spend much time in this community over the last couple of years, as I’ve been primary caregiver to my elderly mom. She passed in July and I’m finally finding a bit more time, so I’m trying to drop by here and there.

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