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Blown By the Wind

Dandelion Bright yellow flowers Its delicate seeds Blown by the wind Some teenagers Blown by the wind Landing uncertain Form: Shanzi

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/13/2012 8:36:00 AM
Stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments on my writings Sara. I hope to be reading your poetry for many years to come. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us and may you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/3/2012 7:12:00 AM
flowers and youth both so lovely blooms.. Sara u have captured it all with this captivating poem luv..
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Date: 7/2/2012 8:36:00 AM
nice shanzi sara is this for the contest if it is good luck
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Date: 7/1/2012 6:42:00 PM
Nice parallel between the flowers and the youth. Good poetry! Peace & love Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/1/2012 12:30:00 PM
very rich, enriching and personal poem, sara, and i like the comparative approach here.. a winner for me..:) hugggs to you, karter, and family!..:)
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Date: 7/1/2012 10:48:00 AM
love this clever write, Sara - love the way you compare teenagers to the dandelion seeds
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Date: 7/1/2012 8:13:00 AM
Ah, how true Sara...thanks for this nice poem this fine Sunday morning! - Tim
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Date: 7/1/2012 6:05:00 AM
Very cool twist! Sara! Jimbo
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Date: 6/30/2012 8:06:00 PM
This is an infectious poem, fills me up with thought! Quite the insightful poem my friend! Great Work!!
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Date: 6/30/2012 4:38:00 PM
well said Sara - and well written - oxox Anne-Lise
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