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Even if “The Exercise” is a fluff piece, “a bad Marx Brothers reject” (as one reviewer called it) it still serves a purpose in allowing viewers the freedom of choice to make up their own minds.  And for those ready to give it a negative nod, remember there are many who understand there is a very fine line between sanity’s challenge and insanity’s judgment adherents. 

Blowing Off Steam by Odin Roark Being a little mad is essential, Otherwise, existing might necessitate a strait jacket. He wasn’t alone. Sidewalks were strewn with them, Whether under-the-bridge encampments, Or penthouse luxuries, People were people, And madness was madness, And purging was necessary. How tenuous the steam beneath the lid, How quiet the whistle at times, Desiring merely to signal the time To pour out the contents, Be it angst, Or expression needing expressing, Subjectivity seeking its objective resolve. Yet… He thought far too many quash the heat that whistles at them, Fearful that boiling over might ensue Instead of merely lifting the pressure, Pouring the rise-in-heat contents Into a encapsulation that can be contemplated As it cools. His daily ritual of waiting as it becomes sippable, Reminded him that this little bit of madness So essential to sanity, Relied on finding respite in its catharsis. He understood this momentary going off the rails Needn’t be a case of judgmental attack Merely a freedom of opinion exercise, and… He was okay with being the minority, Blowing off steam occasionally. He wasn’t fearful of sanity’s dichotomy.

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Date: 12/24/2014 1:06:00 PM
An interesting analysis and statement.
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