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Blowing a Kiss To You

Two sisters born afar from my terrain one rising near Taj Mahal ‘s glorious dome , another hopping on lanes of maple trees; still, letters trace their heartfelt rays enduring continental divide like silken wishes on angel cheeks plying on a relay of starlit skies. And though zones of time differ in paddles of midnight’s arm stretched, laughter and whispers scoop bowls of friendship sweet and lucent as dawn; touching me through live words in a gather of images warmer than sun’s crawl. I fold my eyes on sands of hourglass blowing winged kisses to miles distant yet, near in the fireglow of affection’s graces. *especially for Yasmin Khan and Vie Bombardieri Michael Falotico’s Contest: Blowing a Kiss By nette onclaud

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Date: 8/12/2012 10:10:00 AM
Beautiful!
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Date: 8/9/2012 8:42:00 AM
This si so so so sweet and beautiful write Nette...Luck in the contest. xoxo Laila
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Date: 8/8/2012 1:25:00 AM
A wonderful write!! sweet kiss for two sweeet ladies of the soup.Michael will like it Nette!Best wishes to you.
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Date: 8/7/2012 9:08:00 PM
You chose two of the sweetest ladies on Soup to blow kisses to. Awesome tribute. And I see Yasmin really adored this! Vi too!!
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Date: 8/7/2012 1:04:00 PM
Full of love for friends. Luck in the contest. Love, daver
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Date: 8/7/2012 8:04:00 AM
This is a very special write to your friends! Of course they are my friends too here on the Soup! I know why you would write such a glorious poem for them, because they are such wonderful people, ones deserving such graces! You are a special person too Nette, for writing such a fantastic write! I enjoyed this piece a lot this morning! I am glad I got to read this poem, as I read all your posted writings my friend! You are a splendid poet! And it shows by each of your creative poems you write! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 8/7/2012 8:07:00 AM
Oh I forgot, You will do awesome in the contest, with this poem you should get 1st place!
Date: 8/7/2012 6:50:00 AM
A sweet and beautiful kiss poem Nette. - Wish you luck in contest. - Have a warm woll sock day. - oxox // big hug Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/7/2012 6:45:00 AM
Nette, you penned a gem, what a lovely write dedicated to these beautiful ladies :) all the best for MJF's *hugs*
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Date: 8/7/2012 2:49:00 AM
a beautiful and peaceful write. good luck, Jancarl
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Date: 8/7/2012 2:25:00 AM
beautiful write:)
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Date: 8/7/2012 1:58:00 AM
Nette, just excellent and a great choice...David
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Date: 8/6/2012 10:14:00 PM
Oh wow...written beautifully!!! I'm sure they would love this Nette...lovely pen of yours!!
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