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Blow Bitter Wind

Before we were ready Last days of summer came. October blew in With an abundance of rain. Biting cold wind Instead of warm sun Told us Autumn was here, Too soon it's begun. Early mornings, now dark, Remind us winter is nigh. Wind blows and blows In the grey clouded sky. November is next, blustery and bold. December will follow, bitter and cold.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/10/2012 2:33:00 PM
I so hope you are having a fine holiday season, Francine. I have enjoyed reading your write today, its dark and dreary here. Light & Love
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Date: 12/1/2012 2:42:00 PM
Each season has it's own joy & its own pain! It's too cold to walk here now..I'm feeling house bound. Light & Love
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Date: 10/24/2012 2:56:00 AM
We get it hot then snow down south, hot sometimes then a cold wind blows, like tonight..weird weather here in brisbane might be 90/30 tomorrow or not? cuddles from me xox
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Date: 10/21/2012 3:50:00 PM
brrrr....nicely written....
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Date: 10/20/2012 3:13:00 PM
With that I'm already freezing.... Good acrostic.
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Date: 10/16/2012 9:56:00 PM
Not only an acrostic but a rhyming one. And I love rhyming poems. Good job.
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Date: 10/16/2012 3:11:00 PM
an excellent acrostic! i think this poem would be great even if it weren't an acrostic, but that just adds the icing to the cake...
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Date: 10/16/2012 2:57:00 PM
Great season work..Enjoyed reading ..We have had a dry October this year with warm days and cool nights..It is suppose to get colder at night the last of this week..Sara
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Date: 10/16/2012 8:07:00 AM
These are the days we will all be here on soup ,I know I will Francine.Great Poem and true too. Anne
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Date: 10/16/2012 7:40:00 AM
I love this kind of day..it just calls for a good book and some memories of summer. Well done. BG
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Date: 10/16/2012 2:53:00 AM
Autumn song and the nature is getting ready to sleep. -well written. - Have a nice day. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/16/2012 2:29:00 AM
Really liked you poem so descriptive and true! Have a good day, Omneya
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Date: 10/16/2012 2:18:00 AM
So lovely. You have described the wind enchantingly. I loved it.
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