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blow away

absorbing you like thirsty earth hard, brittle ground it isn't easy so many rain drops run off before you get under my skin now I could be saturated and you dry up and blow away

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Date: 11/15/2023 7:46:00 PM
nicely conveyed -
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Date: 11/15/2023 4:31:00 PM
hmmm....I sense some discontent in this poem...unique read. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Steven Young
Date: 11/23/2023 5:23:00 AM
Content with my discontent, though... I grow.

Book: Shattered Sighs