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Colorful soap bubbles

One night I lay in bed. It was in spring. Outside my house were tiny buds on trees. I spied them from my window blossoming before my eyes, and then as if to tease me, they grew huge with multi-colors bright. They broke free from their branches; up they rose enchantingly into the star-filled night - not blossoms any more, I would suppose! I raced outside to see how high they’d lift as if they were balloons that were fleeing! They’d grown transparent. As I watched them drift, it dawned on me - bubbles I was seeing! A beeping sound ensued. The bubbles popped! That damn alarm! My lovely dream was stopped. April 4. 2015/ Sonnet for the Blossoms and Bubbles Contest of Olive Eloisa Guillermo

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Date: 4/13/2015 8:45:00 AM
Damn alarm spoils so many great dreams! Just when I get the gal alone the alarms rings an end to it all... Great poem my friend. Amazing write considering the subject matter.. A7 from me and love the rhyming!!
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Date: 4/8/2015 4:02:00 PM
Very neat write Andrea. I was pulled right in and really liked the ending, which adds even more to this "dreamy" piece. Great to read your work always. Take care!
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Date: 4/8/2015 1:53:00 AM
Alas, the evil alarm has obliterated another wonderful dream. Well penned.
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Date: 4/6/2015 8:31:00 AM
How amazing!! Loved the poem and the ending!!! :D
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Date: 4/5/2015 9:09:00 PM
beautiful...I was talking with my nephew who lives in Iowa and he just got a job in Muscatine at a big furniture company...I think Hahn...mostly office furniture...he is in IT
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Date: 4/5/2015 11:58:00 AM
I love the surprise ending Andrea...wonderful write ...Happy Easter
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Date: 4/5/2015 11:18:00 AM
This is so mystical and magical, Andrea! A very enjoyable read. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Kimberly
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Date: 4/4/2015 8:57:00 PM
So nice to read your poetry this evening, Andie, Happy Easter. Light & Love
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Date: 4/4/2015 11:27:00 AM
A brilliant write my dear friend, Andrea. I'm so delighted and grateful to read your precious gem tonight. Thank you so much for sharing and Good luck in the contest! Have a blessed Lenten and Easter Season to you and your family! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora
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Date: 4/4/2015 10:54:00 AM
Very creative take on the theme. Made me smile. Blessings for the contest, Andie. Kim :)
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Date: 4/4/2015 8:44:00 AM
Lovely indeed!
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Date: 4/4/2015 8:35:00 AM
Wonderful, Andrea. At first I though it was a fairy tale - did not anticipate your excellent ending! Nice dream! Best wishes for the contest. Sandra
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Date: 4/4/2015 7:38:00 AM
Now this is the way to dream. Beautiful images of bubbles.
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Date: 4/4/2015 1:16:00 AM
I think your beautiful sonnet would present better on the page if left aligned but nonetheless it's what's within that's most important and in that you have written a truly awesome poem in sonnet form. Thanks for sharing it with Poetry Soup.
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Date: 4/3/2015 11:54:00 PM
So Beautiful!!
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Date: 4/3/2015 10:34:00 PM
Something always come along to "burst your bubble". Went to a public seder tonight and tomorrow one at my family's. Met some writers tonight. Woman seem to be overtaking us men. I once entered a contest and my girl of the time did, too - she won a prize - I did not! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish'
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Date: 4/3/2015 6:13:00 PM
I absolutely adore the ending. This is brilliant poetic story telling! A Fav!
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Date: 4/3/2015 4:50:00 PM
Its 23.47pm and hope you dont mind me to continue the dream in my sleep ,because its such a beautiful dream of blooms ,blossoms and enchanting nature. Such an amazing post.Happy Easter sweet Andrea,to you and your loved ones xxx
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Date: 4/3/2015 4:46:00 PM
A dream, yes it was a lovely dream..I was wondering where you were going with this poem..good luck in the contest...I think yours is better than mine..
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Date: 4/3/2015 4:45:00 PM
such beautiful imagery ... and then the alarm sounded and the bubble bursts - happens to me all the time lol - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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