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Blossoms and Bubbles

Sweet blossoms bloom under a sky so round and arc toward sunlight with a fragrant scent They dance in silence above rooted ground Green leaves tilt upward in a subtle bent Dare to pluck blossoms for window display and watch soft bubbles clinging to their stem Should I arrange flowers in glass ballet, or allow them life, so I'll not condemn? For what is beauty if its stem is cut, and placed in water apart from its birth? To watch blooms wilt as fragrant flowers shut and tossed away when it has lost its worth Rather keep blooms beneath cathedral sky For humming bee's wings, colored butterflies 3/25/15 contest Blossoms and Bubbles

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Date: 4/18/2015 5:46:00 PM
Frederic, Congratulations on your awesome BLOSSOMS AND BUBBLES win.... XOX .... ~Linda~
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Date: 4/14/2015 1:27:00 AM
tenderly quilled as always, and seamless too, frederick... round of applause on your award!
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Date: 4/13/2015 10:36:00 PM
Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love
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Date: 4/12/2015 6:15:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Frederic - you excel at this form!!:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/12/2015 2:49:00 PM
Wonderful imagery, the scene is so vivid in my mind. Congratulations on your win a 7. Blessings dear friend Eve
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Date: 4/12/2015 9:55:00 AM
Beautiful blossoms, are meant to be for all eyes to savor and enjoy......just as such lovely works of poetry, are meant to be read !! This is a lovely take on the contest, Frederic!! Congratulations to you!
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Date: 4/12/2015 9:51:00 AM
Frederic, the imagery is oozing plus the questions that you infused! Insightful and cleverly done!! I love the reflective way you did that.. ! Thank you and congratulations!.. //olive eloisa
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Frederic Parker
Date: 4/12/2015 7:08:00 PM
Thank you my poetic friend and for your kindness
Date: 4/12/2015 9:50:00 AM
"for what is beauty if it's stem is cut". That is one great "sonnetic" shift Frederic. I tend to prefer my flowers "beneath cathedral sky" also. Thanks for this one it slowed me and made me relax into its subtle meaning.
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Date: 3/27/2015 3:45:00 PM
you awaken all of my senses as i savor the poetic mood of this piece, frederick... superb!..huggs
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Date: 3/25/2015 9:25:00 PM
Beautiful imagery in perfect, flowing words, and I so agree! Best wishes in the contest...this is already a winner to me...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/25/2015 4:00:00 PM
simply stunning sonnet Frederic you excel at this form -good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 3/25/2015 2:39:00 PM
Very lovely sonnet. Good Luck in the contest. ~Jan
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Date: 3/25/2015 2:38:00 PM
- Beautiful poem, Federic - I wish you best of luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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