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Blossoming of the Rose

As I deal with ill attitude again Knowing full well he could have died Sun shines still, though feel icy pouring rain Now put on the fragrance of perfume outside Experience pain inside where puddles stood Hidden within loving heart things not seen Long once more~escape to the wild woods Where letting loose a scream~sobs inbetween Screams trapped inside the house would raise the eaves Unless those screams and sobs tied with thick twine Or maybe tied with last year's pruning of vine Release can't carry feelings on shirt sleeve Somehow will heal be much better come spring When the pale pink rose will be blossoming

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/15/2013 5:09:00 PM
sara, do you remember your funny poem called Duck, even though it was just for fun, it would be a great entry in my FAVES contest. I am going thru the faves of members who might not be able to figure out what I faved for them. Hope my contest is not closed by the time you see this. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/27/2011 12:57:00 AM
nice work.I enjoyed it.
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Date: 6/27/2011 12:57:00 AM
Date: 6/26/2011 5:04:00 PM
a most beautiful piece written under duress no doubt of all around u my friend.. remember they ares tests from above and we have His Luv to carry us through.. it does get better .. prayers sent to all u in need my friend...
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Date: 6/26/2011 5:04:00 PM
a most beautiful piece written under duress no doubt of all around u my friend.. remember they ares tests from above and we have His Luv to carry us through.. it does get better .. prayers sent to all u in need my friend...
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Date: 6/26/2011 8:41:00 AM
Very nice Sonnet here Sara...liked it.
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Date: 6/26/2011 6:27:00 AM
Great Sonnet Sara... and once again your words shine bright...luv Michael
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Date: 6/26/2011 5:50:00 AM
Absolutely amazing poem Sara , very well written. Anne
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