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Autumn entices a lavish trail Brilliant her portrait through nippy air, Cruising along near winter hills Draped by amber, tangerine prints Each with mixed tinges from her shade, Fragrant as lavender perfume. Gaily, children with trimmed baskets Huddle along rows of colored flowers... Into the lea, small arms gather Jasmines and thistles to bring home Keeping some for merry-go-rounds; Long after cool noontime is done. More bounty twirls on violet edges, yet Not one dares to ruffle the charm Of a harvest, turning into rosette- mauve, Playing through hours when youngsters hop Quite briskly, for more peek-a-boos Resting awhile... humming, giggling away. Suddenly, Mom calls from afar That echoes of floral gaiety's end, Until amber petals wave goodbye Vanishing... as toes strut down While Autumn reels then flings a gift; Xenias fluttering on woven trays Yellow -orange like November's hue; Zestful, kids cheer...tomorrow again! ----------- Still-Life Autumn for Eve Roper 10/23/2020

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Date: 11/22/2021 3:54:00 PM
Lovely imagery, a beautiful write. Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 10/26/2020 10:01:00 AM
Such a colorful, playful acrostic, Nette. This is a play date with autumn through a child's eyes! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/26/2020 9:40:00 AM
What a beauty Nette, this is absolutely beautiful, the way you describe Autumn and how children enjoy it, and as for the pic, it is outstanding - it speaks volumes - men have no chance, even when they are young confused boys. Love this poem Nette, and so, so glad you won! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/26/2020 5:36:00 AM
- Beautiful and poetic, and reflects the restless play of colors, Nette :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/25/2020 9:03:00 PM
Congratulations, nette, on your number 1 win in this contest for your excellent write!!
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Date: 10/25/2020 9:03:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win, great imagery . Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/25/2020 1:38:00 PM
Lovely write... Wishing you a win for your beautiful poem. God bless you and happy writing... wonderful caress from the pen
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Date: 10/24/2020 6:26:00 AM
You are so talented, Nette: Another thrilling poem on my favorite season. Sank into this pile of leaves, laughing. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 10/24/2020 4:46:00 AM
You created a spirited, eloquent poem in a form that is challenging. This kind of autumn wakes all senses.
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Date: 10/23/2020 10:56:00 PM
An ABC poem that's full of imagery. Beautiful. ~~
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Date: 10/23/2020 5:30:00 PM
Nette, the enchantment of your poem takes my breath away.. the emotion and imagery flows so naturally the ABC form melts into the beauty of your poem. Exquisitely and skillfully penned. Best wishes for a win, dear poetess, and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/23/2020 3:09:00 PM
Amazed by the skillful write in ABC, capturing the sights and sounds of autumn. Well done, Nette.
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Date: 10/23/2020 1:51:00 PM
Nice one! Sure to rope in this one! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 10/23/2020 12:41:00 PM
WoW! Nette, This is outstanding! The Autumn season is standing tall in this well written piece. Your chosen words gave life to the portrait that you painted with your talented ink. And to top it all off you wrote this in the ABC form!Good content and imagery. It looks like a winner to me.I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Excellent job. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis
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