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Bloody Time

Tick – another minute goes by… Another calendar, another clock… If I turn off all the noise, I can hear my heart beat… That old empty sound… The vast open array of life, seems to creep through my windows and guards my door… In visions of yesterday, they came knocking and left a note, we’ll call back, signed, life… Tock – It is nothing more than times passage… It is but another lock that keeps me in this vision… Separate in the knowledge of action, there is no place to call home… Driven by the thirst to make the most of this cold place – I curl up in a quiet spot to view the hands of torment… Tick – another minute goes by…

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Date: 6/1/2011 4:15:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Robert. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 6/1/2011 12:18:00 AM
really creative write robert i think its awesome Luv*Skat
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Date: 5/31/2011 9:23:00 PM
Interesting write. Enjoyed
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