Bloody Mary

Bloody Mary was a queen - and scary; She just loved sending folks to the tower but she still always managed to look damn sour. For Andrea’s clerihew contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/23/2012 6:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning poem in Andrea's "Fresh Crop of Clerihews" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 10/22/2012 10:03:00 AM

Congrats jack on your win with this great Clerihew!

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 10/22/2012 8:25:00 AM

congrats on your win! cool choice of subject...can picture her now with that sour look!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/22/2012 5:20:00 AM

A great entry Jack. Congrats on your win. These are sure fun to read.

Tahera Mannan

Date: 10/22/2012 2:34:00 AM

Many congrats dear Jack for this wonderful win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/21/2012 12:29:00 PM

JACK, congratulations with your awesome win in Andrea's "Fresh Crop of Clerihews" contest.. enjoyed all her winners and the people they wrote about... always~ :-) PD"

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/21/2012 3:40:00 AM

CONGRATS JACK LUV ON A GREAT WIN FOR THIS WITTY ENTRY .. HOW IS DAD DOING MY FRIEND??

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/20/2012 10:40:00 PM

Jack, this was sure a funny one!! I should have known it was an Englander who did it!! Big congrats in my contest. Glad to see your name on my list. Luv, Andrea

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/25/2012 7:58:00 PM

Grrrrr....evil villianess, right?...what a great one! gwendolen

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/25/2012 6:59:00 AM

Story of a viscious soul. She is getting her torture now.....

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/24/2012 8:13:00 PM

Hello Jack, this is scary..i hate the game bloody mary... but the drink is okay... thank you for the smile ,, during your comment.. good luck...pd

Terry O'Leary

Date: 9/24/2012 6:26:00 PM

Funny! Good luck in the contest... Terry

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/24/2012 3:38:00 PM

Cute one..Got a big chuckle..Reads like a winner..You've got the form down pat..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/24/2012 2:22:00 PM

I wonder why she always look so sour, ha ha! This is a very awesome write my friend! This entry will do very well in Andrea's contest! What a glorious idea you had for a person, very clever! Do you know much about Bloody Mary? I know very little, just that she was pretty mean...and the drink is just as nasty! Lovely little piece Jack, Great Work!!