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Bloodied Souls

Conflicts and troubles Continents and tribes Tomorrows left reft Children, their future In wanton describe ~~~~~ Maiming to kill Shooting to thrill Crimson will spill Genocidal ~~~~ Soldiers they Boys and girls In whose world ~~~ These young Bloodied ~~ Souls ~ http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/war-7.php

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 9/29/2014 2:08:00 AM

Thoughtful deep write..:) I hope someday no more soldiers that will fight for war rather only love..

James Fraser
Date: 9/30/2014 5:35:00 PM

Let's hope so Olive, but sadly, Wars will never recede, as long as there's one from each side who detests each other. I wrote a poem called 'Two Humans Left' if you'd be so kind to let me know your thoughts, James :) x

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 10/12/2010 10:06:00 AM

James, This is very touching and made me stop and think. Thank you for your words... As Always, Shar

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 9/19/2010 12:51:00 PM

You are so sweet and kind.Really good writer thanks for the congrats on my win James.Teresa