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Below is the poem entitled BLOOD OF NATIONS which was written by poet Lucas Mkude. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I’m looking for mine daily 
A gene of combinations and strengths
A blood we share in hidings
Nation and nations as siblings 
A blood of friends satisfaction 

Arouses sense and feelings
Bringing joy in sadness
Strengthening weak to fight 
A blood that flow uneven
Too economy to people like us 

A wonderful world like this 
Where number of soldiers sounds
Borders of states are intact
with secret security full paid
But none  of them dare to grasp
For the blood flows like electron
Penetrates deep to impassable 

Is it true they fail to victim?
Why few are seized and bailed
Why is becoming a song
With big budget of state security
It is real a wonderful music  I hear
Like dum! dum! dum! express your self
For the blood spreads everywhere
And ruin national’s development

A blood of foolish and stupid
Riching capitalist and bourgeoisie 
Protected by leaders and ministers
That undermine equality and improvement
Branding abuse is irony
Preventive education is nonsense
These are extravagances and exploitation
The solution is simple I suggest 
Killing the flower of production
That bee buzzes for her saccharine 

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  1. Date: 8/13/2013 4:42:00 PM
    Lucas...why oh why can't nations just get along and..people everywhere just be content to live together side by side happily? Your poem was written deep from your heart...I like it..

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 8/17/2013 7:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You did so very well...I pray things improve soon for you and your family and country...
    Mkude Avatar Lucas Mkude
    Date: 8/14/2013 11:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Dona! i was trying to express something bad which is going on between countries and the one involved are leaders and rich people.
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 5:16:00 AM
    Nicely done my friend

    Mkude Avatar Lucas Mkude
    Date: 7/25/2013 5:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank very much Sean
  1. Date: 7/24/2013 1:20:00 PM
    I like your end-line very much.

    Mkude Avatar Lucas Mkude
    Date: 7/25/2013 5:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Christine