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Blood Moon

Blood moon embraces the night Flaming sky crimson glow Words spoken end in sight Darkness taking over a dying light Dreams rest on a cloud of doubt Blood moon embraces the night Searching for souls wrong or right As the silent night surrounds Words spoken end in sight Blessed words reviled so bright That sat souls afire Blood moon embraces the night Holding tight souls take to flight Filling hearts and minds Words reviled end in sight Somewhere a peaceful height Crimson sky did shine Blood moon embraces the night Words reviled end in sight

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2014 9:17:00 PM

Karen ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. <3 =LINDA

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/7/2014 5:37:00 AM

A brilliant write. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week , karen

Richard Waring

Date: 3/20/2014 6:10:00 PM

This is really creative!

Karen Fitzpatrick
Date: 3/21/2014 5:08:00 AM

Thank you, I'm new to this site, but looking forward to reading some of your poems. Karen

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/20/2014 12:41:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Karen :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/19/2014 11:55:00 PM

This is very deep, Karen:), A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Karen Fitzpatrick
Date: 3/20/2014 5:06:00 AM

Thank you for your comments, and thank you for the offer to enter your contest. I love writing poetry. My boss got me started when he thought it would be benafical for me to take some english classes. What turned out to be something to help me in my job, turned out to be a love of writing poetry and my way of talking to God. Thank you for your support, Karen

Skat A

Date: 3/19/2014 9:53:00 AM

Karen, beautiful poem, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Karen Fitzpatrick
Date: 3/19/2014 10:59:00 AM

Thank you, so much for your comment. 5 years ago I was told I had cancer. I started writing poetry, It made me feel good, I t was my way of talking to God. They now have my condition under control. I like writing poems, I may not be the best poet, but thats alright, if my poems reach out to someone, that makes me feel like I have acomplished something. Thanks new friend, Karen

Teresa Godwin

Date: 3/19/2014 9:09:00 AM

Yes indeed, Crimson sky does shine and words reviled, oh precious end in SIGHT! Love it! Thanks for this. Hope. ~Teresa

Karen Fitzpatrick
Date: 3/19/2014 11:01:00 AM

Writing poems is like theropy for my soul. If I touch someone with what I write, then I feel like I have made a differents in someones life. Thanks for your comment, your new friend Karen