Blood Lust

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Thirsty my love? Drink all of me I just died for you We all bleed for mankind, do we not?

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Paul Callus

Date: 3/14/2015 4:05:00 PM

Hi Arthur....first impression when I read it was similar to Tim's...till I noted your footnote! Of course, a person can bleed for the one who s/he loves ... a total offering!! #7+ // paul

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/14/2015 8:53:00 PM

Thank you Paul, this was written with a few meanings.

Tim Smith

Date: 3/9/2015 11:44:00 PM

This reminds me of the offering of Christ's blood..... I'm not comparing you to Him.....just a similar feeling

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/9/2015 11:49:00 PM

Well if you wish too!!!!!! :) thanks Tim. a lot of levels here. Nice to see someone see that!