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Blood Lust

I see it in you pumping. I hear it in me swishing. In my sleep I lose all thought. In this state I scratch my face. I do it just for some release.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/18/2010 9:24:00 PM
Ahh, come on, man. U can do better than that, right? Throw u'r back into it!!! Get freakin' MAD!!!! Great thrust, but u didn't make me orgasm. (i was ALMOST there.....and u pulled out!?!)
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Date: 9/9/2010 12:57:00 PM
Great stuff love it sarah x
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Date: 9/9/2010 12:33:00 PM
Yes thank you Josh, you are right any one can be a poet. ***** wow! The words rush thru my blood, but i can not be sure what you mean, I can only assume. Enjoyed your poem...LeeAnn
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