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Blood

Blood inside our bodies flows To keep our tickers ticking. We never think about it ‘til A problem’s up and kicking. A tiny sample might reveal Deficiencies or glitches, For blood cells can’t keep secrets – They’re like adolescent snitches. The needle hits a vein and then The truth comes pouring out To let the doctor know What all the fuss was all about. Amazingly, one little vial Can give a needed clue, Which was within us all along, But hidden from our view.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/13/2013 7:54:00 PM
nice rhyme ilene ;}
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Date: 7/31/2013 8:59:00 AM
Yeah, those adolescent snitches have saved my ass a time or two ;-). Very clever and well-rhymed. Sometimes, however, those doctors don't quite understand what the blood is trying to tell them. Some secrets will remain so for a little bit longer, I am afraid.
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Date: 7/30/2013 3:42:00 PM
Just had mine drawn, Wish me luck. They're testing for glucose levels. Got Ice cream? :)
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Date: 7/30/2013 11:36:00 AM
Frightens me to know how much so......awesome poem Ilene ....really smiled at this one..thanks
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Date: 7/30/2013 10:58:00 AM
AMAZING, Ilene! Simply amazing...and OH SO TRUE! :) I'm impressed as ever! HUGS
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Date: 7/30/2013 12:12:00 AM
So many things hidden in our bodies and all those tiny cells. You wrote of it so well!!!
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