Blizzard

High winds churl, howling calling forth their minions open wide the gates the battle will be long, fierce! through the mountains, hills and vales ~*~ 02/08/13

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Jack Horne

Date: 4/13/2013 1:15:00 PM

just love this, my friend - I felt chilly reading it, lol

Painted Hunter

Date: 3/14/2013 6:44:00 AM

I love this, Annalise!...battles, high winds, minions, mountains...Wow! All this in one tanka! You have a lovely name, by the way.

Audrey Haick
Date: 3/14/2013 8:45:00 PM

Thank you, Caleb. I enjoyed writing this as we held our breath during this storm! LOL

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 2/25/2013 12:59:00 PM

Very intense! Perfect description of the sometimes wicked weather. Hopefully you do get inspired for that contest. :)

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 2/9/2013 12:13:00 PM

An amazing Tanka - very well worded. Thanks for stopping by my Tanka Hug Me, Annalise. I am so pleased you like it. Love -Mohammad

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2013 11:43:00 AM

GREAT way to do tanka. I did a windy one too recently (a sonnet I think)

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 2/9/2013 9:02:00 AM

Shivering painting written my your pen. Conveyed well with your tanka. Warm Smiles, Connie

Joseph May

Date: 2/9/2013 6:35:00 AM

wonderful tanka Annalise

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/9/2013 6:13:00 AM

Lovely written Annalise! - Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)