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BLISS near the river’s edge water lilies overflow in our sunlit eyes ~ we row through life’s bittersweet into breathless blue waters 2nd Place One old or new tanka 9/19/2016

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Date: 12/25/2016 9:04:00 PM
Beautifully written!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2016 7:53:00 AM
Thank you, Newton!
Date: 9/28/2016 11:07:00 PM
Beautiful write congrats!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/28/2016 11:19:00 PM
Thank you, Tanis!
Date: 9/26/2016 7:45:00 AM
Charmingly poetic! Congrats!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/26/2016 10:27:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 9/25/2016 7:55:00 PM
wow, Gorgeous writing. HE judged well. Congratulations.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2016 8:00:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! :)
Date: 9/25/2016 2:02:00 AM
Well done, congrats on your win !
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2016 11:16:00 AM
Thank you, Tanis :)
Date: 9/24/2016 2:57:00 PM
Many congrats Kim - a beautiful tanka:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/24/2016 6:06:00 PM
Thank you, Jan :)
Date: 9/24/2016 2:17:00 PM
Kim, beautiful tanka lovely lady...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/24/2016 2:26:00 PM
Thank you Luloo!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/24/2016 2:25:00 PM
Thank you Luloo!
Date: 9/24/2016 10:25:00 AM
Wonderful and powerful metaphor in your lovely Tanka, Kim. Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/24/2016 10:43:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/24/2016 10:43:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra! :)

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