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Below is the poem entitled Bliss which was written by poet Yoni Dvorkis. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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*Cinquain challenge from Carol Brown

feels great
to dream about
when something is missing

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  1. Date: 10/14/2010 6:41:00 PM
    Much captured in just five lines. Always good to end with hope. Nice answer to the challenge. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words on my poem. Karen

  1. Date: 12/3/2009 4:39:00 AM
    Beautifully written cinquain, short and sweet!

  1. Date: 9/23/2009 12:28:00 PM
    bliss is found moment by moments during excellent sex. and then, in the afterglow.

  1. Date: 9/21/2009 4:14:00 PM
    hmmmmm, have you ever reached a bliss state? Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/16/2009 8:05:00 PM
    nicely done

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 4:48:00 PM
    Like the hope at the end. Much said in just five lines. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us.

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 11:23:00 AM
    I Love This Yoni. Missing Hope....It Makes Me Want To Write. . . Ps Thank You For The Comments. I Let On For You And Sara Together...Im Glad You Liked It =) Luv Always Booboo

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 10:21:00 AM
    bliss state is great yet I can hold it but a second.......Light & Love!

  1. Date: 9/13/2009 4:07:00 AM
    We all need to dream about bliss. Nicely done. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 9/11/2009 9:19:00 AM
    Great response to the challenge, Yoni ... what fun is PoetrySoup !!

  1. Date: 9/11/2009 7:15:00 AM
    I love this bliss-Celene

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 10:44:00 PM
    this is so true Yoni..excellent

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 8:04:00 PM
    Per your comments, no one filled with bliss could be considered a "negative Nancy." Got a good laugh from the comment, though I understand the comparison of flying too high near the sun. Love you! Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 6:44:00 PM
    artistry in close form! Yoni!...jim

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 6:44:00 PM
    I love the way this brings a positive ending! Nicely done! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 6:39:00 PM
    Nicely done maestro! And thanks so much for your comments. It is said of wisdom, that when one can find humor in his own shortcomings, he knows where to find truth. "his own heart", Smile, Sincerely John Moses

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 3:41:00 PM
    Keep that hope coming. What an uplifting view in this poem. Blessings to you for sharing it. Karen

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 1:08:00 PM
    True words as ever from our "intense" young poet! Too bad some only find bliss when they dream. Your clever mind explodes with creativity and now I must study the cinquain form and attempt to meet the challenge. Thanks for the tag, Yoni. This should be fun and I can use some today. I'm tired of hauling boxes and unpacking. Ready to research the cinquain and respond shortly. Love you, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 10:32:00 AM
    Nicely done. Great messsage in a few short lines. Keep writing. Sara