Bliss

I go up I go down I go forwards and backwards you go in circles we go in love

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Date: 1/18/2021 10:33:00 AM

I LOVE this one that was on the winner list. Congrats for your win.

Ricky Muse
Date: 1/18/2021 2:11:00 PM

Thank you lady. Recognition is my favorite fruit. Be blessed.

Date: 1/16/2021 1:08:00 PM

the ups and downs of a relationship ...oh what a super ending, many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Ricky Muse
Date: 1/17/2021 8:32:00 AM

Hey Jan. This little poem began as a song and then morphed into a poem. I dig when that happens. Thanks for the input.......................peace!

Date: 12/8/2018 3:51:00 PM

Short but full of movement and suggestive imagery...of course, the end result being love. Regards // paul

Ricky Muse
Date: 12/8/2018 4:44:00 PM

A little poem that addresses a big topic. Thanks for stopping by.

Date: 7/12/2018 4:31:00 PM

It's that last line that makes it all bliss :)

Ricky Muse
Date: 8/8/2018 8:08:00 PM

LM love is the truth.

Date: 7/11/2018 8:50:00 PM

Yes, that is absolute bliss. Love is a circle, as it keeps going- it never ends. ~ Brandy

Ricky Muse
Date: 7/12/2018 1:34:00 AM

Thanks Brandy. I cannot tell you how personal this poem is.