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Blink of Death

Happy, we were together. Euphoric, we were feeling together. By the lake on the mountain, Hands we held together. We were sudden friends When our roads decided to melt. Living to love, nothing could tear us; As so we thought. When sudden affliction stroke her blessing heart, my soul died one piece at a time as she traveled the hell road When she was gone and my reason gone with her, the desperation was queen and soul, and all. So if I dream that I have her, I have her My heart feels shining rapture Blended with her kindness and my sorrow, May I grow stronger by the blithe song she left me to sing alone. Now as a hopeless paint splasher I dance under the ship of night in her mind’s worth with a grievous feelings of her oblivion.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/18/2016 1:16:00 PM
Hi Nikola, hope to see you back again. SKAT 2016
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Date: 12/3/2015 10:53:00 AM
Excellent Elegy poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Date: 9/29/2015 8:30:00 PM
Nikola, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/29/2015 1:52:00 PM
Hi Nikola, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 9/29/2015 4:36:00 AM
- Hey Nikola :) - Welcome with your first great poem here on P- Soup - Hope your stay will give you much pleasure - I've been here since 11/26/2011 ....... it is a pleasure to share poems and read what others write - I wish you good luck :) - Nice to "meet" you :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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