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Blinding Ocean

She said it was not the right time; He said he would wait forever. She said he was not the right one; He said he would do whatever. Is she blind; or is he blind? Or are both so; in an ocean where none can see.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/27/2014 12:27:00 PM
Hi Ahmed, inspirational write with a deep question! Keep churning them out my friend! Kika
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Ahmed Rashwan
Date: 7/27/2014 12:49:00 PM
Thanks you so much Kika! Didn't expect a comment this fast haha!
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Ahmed Rashwan
Date: 7/27/2014 12:49:00 PM
Thank*

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