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Moonlit nights and sunshine days-- never she knew how they are, how a twilight takes its birth before melting into the starry night. Still she can feel a sunrise, or the hush of full moon night whispering into her ears "Nurture the candle's flame deep within you".

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/3/2012 5:27:00 AM
yes, I can see it now. It must be the Parise poem!
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Date: 7/1/2012 6:10:00 AM
Lines 3/4 very cool, Kash! Jimbo
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Date: 6/30/2012 6:57:00 AM
I love your words "a twilight takes its birth before melting into the starry night". You do have a wonderful imagination Kash. This poem appeals very much to me. Thanks for your comment on my silkworm poem.
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Date: 6/30/2012 6:23:00 AM
oh my, you just made me sigh with this laguis piece, kashi buddy!.. a win over at rick's is my prophecy!...fantastic!... come over.. :) huggs!
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Date: 6/30/2012 6:24:00 AM
*languid*
Date: 6/30/2012 2:46:00 AM
Just beautiful kash, beautiful.....love it. Have a lovely weekend - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/30/2012 1:14:00 AM
wow, so beautiful, Kashinath. I can't think if it is for any contest.Maybe just something that came to you? Keep up this kind of work!
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Date: 6/29/2012 1:49:00 AM
Kash, great images here, for us and the subject...David
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Date: 6/28/2012 5:38:00 PM
Simply lovely images and metaphors !!
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Date: 6/28/2012 4:11:00 PM
mellow, mellow song, kashi.. rick will love this!... how are you?.. come over! ;) huggs
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Date: 6/28/2012 3:37:00 PM
Very expressive and descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 6/28/2012 9:49:00 AM
Lovely! enjoyed reading your wonderful poem!
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Date: 6/28/2012 8:21:00 AM
beautiful write, Kash. Congrats on your wins : )
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