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Blind Sunset

How do you describe a sunset to someone who is blind? I will attempt to find the words, so keep an open mind. Blue is the icy snow you feel on winter's cold, bleak day, when breathing in the chilling air, while riding in a sleigh. Red is the warming of a fire, when drinking some fine wine; senses flushed with heady scent of the smell of knotty pine. Purple is a thundering storm, on chilly autumn night. Electric ozone in the air, which sometimes gives a fright. The orange is that tangy fruit, which tastes so tart and sweet and titillates your taste buds with it's enchanting treat.

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Date: 8/27/2016 11:38:00 PM
Very creative and spot on. I tried closing my eyes after reading, just to try and sense some of what you used. I must say I could picture the blue with the ice. Thank you.
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Terry Hoffman
Date: 8/27/2016 11:50:00 PM
You are most welcome. I spent a lot of time while I was writing this with my eyes closed, trying to imagine the perceptions.

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