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Blind Spot

my birdies, this morning, singing sweetly a love song. the tune in winsome soaring - to this God’s creation I belong. they fall autumnal silent. t’was but a brief flight to my mind. it was private. my birdies out of sight. t’was but a quick interlude - a moment that i caught. brilliantly, it brightened my mood - caught my blind spot. now silence except the rumble of a car or the refrigerator. it is agony - still, i’m humble that God is a regenerator. leaves fall silently, pinched in autumn’s infringment. each branch has flinched with cold rush impingement. and sadly, Gage, the chocolate lab from next door has walked over the rainbow bridge - to the heart a stab, difficult season for my friends - a fall changeover. 10/4/2022

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Date: 10/6/2022 2:16:00 AM
Lovely Kim! Debx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2022 5:26:00 AM
Thanks, Deb xx
Date: 10/4/2022 10:01:00 PM
Lovely descriptions and imagery, Kim. Changing seasons can be a challenge at times. Have a great week, my friend! Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2022 5:26:00 AM
After awhile all sorts of emotions come into play with the changing of seasons. God bless, dear one!
Date: 10/4/2022 1:01:00 PM
Hi Kim, enjoyed the journey and your thoughts within your poem. The final verse was indeed a stab to the heart, thank you for sharing.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/4/2022 3:55:00 PM
A very sad thing for my friends.
Date: 10/4/2022 9:24:00 AM
Gage is in safe hands. "i’m humble that God is a regenerator." as you indicated yourself.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/4/2022 3:55:00 PM
Thank you, Caren and for your care too.
Date: 10/4/2022 8:00:00 AM
I read all of the poems you posted this morning...a great way to start the day. Thanks for sharing your morning with me Kim, Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/4/2022 3:56:00 PM
I appreciate you, Linda! :)
Date: 10/4/2022 6:11:00 AM
Sweet poem with great rhymes.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/4/2022 7:51:00 AM
Thank you, my friend, Hugs ~ Kim

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