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It’s quite a simple situation No need for reason, contemplation We don’t even need a cause Making flaws in perfect laws It’s us that make things complicated So unconcerned, demotivated We model our lives based on theirs But using bent and twisted shapes Eternally seeking an end to our turmoil While this remains a situation (that) Takes no thought or concentration To see the solution’s before our eyes We’re basing laws on perfect flaws

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 3/5/2009 3:44:00 PM
The depth and breadth of this piece is truly remarkable... poetry is meant to provoke and incite... this does both. BRAVO Ema! Best wishes, Keith
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