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What is it that we see when we open our thick eyes? Are we astounded by untouched beauty, or seared by caustic lies? But our eyes, see only what they wish to see be it pristine, dull, or a stain, we strive to understand, unknowing that a concrete truth is almost impossible to find, hidden beneath layers and layers of illusion much like a gem is buried in stone, never shown to others, and lying alone. Truth matters not, not in the game we call life when a decorous portrait can hide the ugliest imperfections in a sense an image is evanescent, and like a picture can be painted over and over making those oblivious to the meaning behind the mad blend of color. Some artists are wisened and know the game well. But at the end of the day, you look in the mirror, and all you see is yourself

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Date: 5/6/2014 6:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Charlie
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Date: 4/29/2014 2:26:00 PM
Cha, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKATrlie,
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Date: 4/24/2014 3:43:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Charlie:) - I choose your first very well written poem - I like it ! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Charlie Westphal
Date: 4/27/2014 6:53:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise! I just discovered this site recently figured I'd make an account, I'm really impressed so far! I look forward to reading your poetry!
Date: 4/24/2014 2:54:00 AM
Charlie, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following and reading your poems. ~Take Care!! From: you're new poet friend ~ LINDA ~
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Charlie Westphal
Date: 4/27/2014 6:54:00 PM
Thanks Linda! Wow I can't believe you noticed my poem after just minutes of being posted. This is an incredible community!

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