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Blessing Star

Your black hair shimmered I knew not the reason I watched it every little season My heart and head simmered Your shapely body twinkled As if never would it be wrinkled Yet it had a little lesion Which never ever rankled You were my heart`s queen Those organs of sight Just witty and bright They caught me off guard An angel is all l had seen I zoomed heavenward!

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Harry Horsman

Date: 7/21/2015 3:59:00 PM

Gone back to your first poem posted here..and it is awesome , just love it....

Betty Bateson

Date: 4/19/2013 10:40:00 AM

Looking up for your star.Beautiful.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/12/2013 11:08:00 AM

Hi; This is the first time that I visit.Congratulations on this being featured. Great poem and you zoomed in the right direction.......Lucilla

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/31/2013 3:47:00 PM

and congrats on this one having been featured. I see you came here not a year ago!!

Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 3/31/2013 4:06:00 PM

Andrea, yes...from that point it was something like a meteoric rise . This is simply courtesy to the great support rendered by this community.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/31/2013 3:46:00 PM

well, you had no new poetry but I went back to your first post ever and found this sweet symbolic one. I love how you zoomed heavenward for your beautiful star!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/11/2012 6:19:00 PM

Ndaba, Congratulations with your awesome poem on the featured spots of the week.. Take care.. ~xox~pd

Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 11/12/2012 3:06:00 PM

Hi Poet Destroyer. Thank you!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/6/2012 6:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your awesome poetry being featured this week Ndaba. Love, Carol

Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 11/6/2012 8:15:00 AM

Thanks, Carol!