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Blessing In Disguize

you had to get to know her never could you tell her never could you show what she didn't know she could tell the truth from your petty little lies one look and you'd be through from her piercing hazel eyes you could try to run but you could never hide from the beauty of her soul she was ominous in mind she had a curse within a blessing that you could not conceive you would wish to take her burden just so she could feel relief she would see to it your paradigms would shift as you perceive she would have you wishing every day an ounce of her you could receive she could make you smile by merely seeing her face and if you held her in your arms you would simply be amazed you would miss as you had never while she was away as you closed your eyes saw her face music would start to play she could freeze you in the moment with a voice sent down from heaven a voice that drew so many tears from any man who dared to feel she would be twelve steps ahead of you at any time at any place realizing whats at stake you would trip yourself within this race eventually the time would come to let her go so she could grow you would leave with countless lessons this she wouldn't know peace would thrive and what you gained and lost would change your life for she is a gift from heaven a blessing in disguize

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Date: 10/12/2013 10:21:00 AM
Good morning Mario, .. Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/11/2013 3:50:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Mario ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/10/2013 4:48:00 PM
A blissful poem and thought, Mario I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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