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Blessed

I see the sun breaking in your eyes first light to a bright new day all the glory in me reach the summit counting all my blessings stolen moments, laughter, I'm having it all from a pundit. It's always those peculiar moods makes me silent but then, all I could hear is the sound of my keyboard racing back and forth could it be my heart and yours that pound. Your words so pure waking my innocence, so demure lifting me to a pedestal shower and outpouring me with respect O Boaz, let me be your Ruth! Did I enthrall you with such sweetness sustaining friendship, your pretty poetess so blessed I have it all, I admit with stark simplicity My Lord, I must humbly say I accept your grace and I offer thee my complete devotion and felicity.

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Date: 6/20/2016 12:09:00 AM
This poem has always washed over me like a wave of joy, knocking me off my feet into a depth of feeling, love and joy where I cannot find my footing, but I am not afraid. This has been one of my favorite poems in your collection, and I am so excited to see it selected for appearance here. Congratulations, dearest Poetess!
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Maricris Cabrera
Date: 6/21/2016 8:47:00 AM
It has always been a pleasure to know you love my poem. A dream to write poetry that permeate the whole word, if possible. Thank you kindly, dear Poet for your inspiring comment.
Date: 5/5/2016 11:23:00 PM
Absolutely fantastic and beautiful write, Maricris Cabrera. Each time I read through it, I see something new and delightful. Boaz is lucky!
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Maricris Cabrera
Date: 5/5/2016 11:32:00 PM
Thank you, really! I guess, Ruth is more lucky. This is a fantastic journey. Nice to have you here, David!
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Maricris Cabrera
Date: 5/5/2016 11:29:00 PM
Thank you very much for your very warm welcome. I am enjoying here already and hope to submit more soon. It's great to know you, Manmath!
Date: 5/5/2016 10:49:00 PM
Maricris, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.....//:) hugs
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Maricris Cabrera
Date: 5/5/2016 11:33:00 PM
Thank you very much for your very warm welcome. I am enjoying here already and hope to submit more soon. It's great to know you, Manmath!
Date: 5/5/2016 10:13:00 PM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Maricris. :)
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Maricris Cabrera
Date: 5/5/2016 11:41:00 PM
Thank you very much. Your warm welcome is so uplifting. I know I will enjoy my time sharing my writes with you and at the same time enjoy reading yours. Hugs!
Date: 5/5/2016 12:11:00 PM
Well done, Maricris,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Maricris Cabrera
Date: 5/5/2016 11:56:00 PM
Hi! Thank you so much, Skat! I'm very excited to post more of my writes here. And I know I'm going to fine with you, nice people. I am a member in 2 poetry communities in Google plus and actually moderating in one. Hugs, my friend!
Date: 5/5/2016 10:53:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this Maricris, really lovely words. Fiona
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Maricris Cabrera
Date: 5/5/2016 11:45:00 PM
Thank you very much, Fiona!

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