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Bleeding Profile

Sunset dips from a bay’s view Its pulp so tangerine clear-- Releasing a minty froth. As her crown bleeds on water I watch a hazy profile-- A faded memory now Tearing my chilling nightfall. Created by Banjo Casto Nov 12 2014 Silhouette A Heptagonet nette onclaud's Contest

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Date: 11/21/2014 11:05:00 PM
Incredible imagery weaved into your poignant write, Banjo! Congrats on your well deserved win!!
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Date: 11/16/2014 4:40:00 PM
Methinks I feel a metaphor. On one level this is the scene of a searing San Francisco sunset, on another the lamenting soul of a lost love. The use of the word "tearing" in the last line, with its multiple meanings...Beautifully written
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Date: 11/16/2014 2:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem Banjo
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Date: 11/16/2014 1:58:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Sara
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Date: 11/16/2014 12:02:00 PM
excellent writing. A very well deserved win. Congrats to you.
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Date: 11/15/2014 4:52:00 PM
the nostalgic flow of your work drew me in, banjo...thank you for joining my contest and big congrats!.. hugggs
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Date: 11/15/2014 7:32:00 AM
what beautiful imagery - many congrats on you win:-) Hugs jan xx
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