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The ringmaster left but the carnival stayed in town. Erect, proud, empowered people stride by living the Crayola dream. Awash in color, characters in the screenplay, the scene played with aborigine like dream walkers. No surface left to its utilitarian plight, all stroked and stoked with the creativity of the artist, all crooned to by boombox and skateboard smack, or the concrete slap of a mariachis’ feet. The burnt bright white light shivers to a Hendricks strum, and the caffeinated come one by one hooked in to hook up, to the juke boxes sixties twang. Children play on Aztec snakes rising from a soft foam of green with mosaic skin and glass eyes freed from the restrictions, the confines, the confounded, gay, straight, bi, free bleeding poetry.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/23/2011 4:07:00 AM
Congratulations Debbie:))
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Date: 3/21/2011 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations to you Debbie for your win in Catie's contest "Free Verse Frenzy". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/21/2011 7:15:00 AM
I loved this the first time I read it. Sensational writing, Deb. #1 in my books. Elaine
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Date: 3/21/2011 12:45:00 AM
ooowowwww, debbs.. i'd rate this as toppers! thumbs up for a gritty piece like this.. : ) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/20/2011 3:37:00 PM
Congrats on your HM in Catie's contest with this excellent entry Debbie.. let us both enjoy our special honors with luv..
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Date: 3/20/2011 11:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Catie's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 3/20/2011 10:10:00 AM
Very entertaining, Deb. Congratulation's on your win in Catie's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 2/25/2011 11:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Debbie,in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "For The Sake Of Free Verse". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2011 6:18:00 PM
I can see itall so viividly, Deb. Thank you for sharingandmany congrat's on your win. Lainie
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Date: 2/20/2011 4:26:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Chris, deborah,
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Date: 2/20/2011 9:25:00 AM
intrinsically designed, debs... a WOW for winning high in the contest! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/20/2011 6:54:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on your wonderful success in the free verse contest luv.. enjoy your chart topping win with luv...
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Date: 2/20/2011 3:02:00 AM
So many amzing images weaved into this poem.Wow. many congrats for this win
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Date: 2/20/2011 1:18:00 AM
This entry is bleeding descriptiveness. Debbie, congratulations on winning in Chris's contest with this presentation.
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Date: 2/19/2011 10:34:00 PM
What a very interesting picture you give here, Debbie--just so alive! you capture so much in this poem-- super congrats on your win :)
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Date: 2/2/2011 8:58:00 AM
i like the way you set the stage to let me rrealize that in the end all bleed poetry! a real gem, debs!! :) hugggs, nette
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Date: 1/22/2011 1:39:00 PM
this is an extraordinary poem. I love the symbolism. Thanks for the write. Julie
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Date: 1/11/2011 9:59:00 PM
such imagery, what i call a 'New age poem' so vibrant so profound. Harry
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Date: 1/10/2011 4:57:00 PM
This sounds also like a place in SF? WAs it that place I saw pictures of? great imagery, dear. Well, I gotta scram and get to the gym. Thanks again for that win. LUv ya, andrea
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Date: 1/10/2011 4:07:00 PM
If I had not seen the photograph in your wonderful blog......I could still see what you saw.....amazing and such decriptive poetry!! Wonderful to accompany your photo journey! (PS.....I am so honored to have a 2nd in your Winter's Holy Days contest....I respect your poetry very much, and coming from you, it is indeed a thrill !! Thanks so much!!
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Date: 1/10/2011 3:04:00 PM
Ya should have slaped this write right on in there with that beautiful blog dear poet ! What a fantastic journey you led Noah and I through today; we thank you kindly Debbie ! much love, james
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Date: 1/10/2011 12:33:00 PM
Quite a visionary piece Debbie.. filled with super imagery and a different view in every verse.. happy u enjoyed a wonderful trip to see your son and your time spent there giving u brilliant ideas for writing as your trip to Egypt did..luv..
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Date: 1/9/2011 9:28:00 PM
I agree. Jack Kerouac said it best. "If you have to ask what it means, then you have failed. No poet would or could give answer. Love, Will
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Date: 1/9/2011 8:40:00 PM
DEEP DEBORAH! I'M ALWAYS AMUSED ON HOW YOUR POETRY COMES TO LIVE WITH FULL IMAGE..~SKAT
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Date: 1/9/2011 6:12:00 PM
Hey Deb....finally gettin' 'round to responding to your comment on my "acrostic"..."JAMESY"..... the color yellow for me signifies hope...I collect yellow glass...and weave it into my indoor container gardens.....the reflections are healing for me.....so....this poem ends with inspiration! not despair!!!! jamie
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