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Bleak and Gray

Blinded by pain blanketed by darkness shrouded in misery i stare into space is there an eternity ? engulfed in emptiness bleakness consumes me i reach out for deliverance but the clutches of my demons push me in deeper lost in a maze i feel life pulsating in the tears which escape me in the vapid heartbeat in the agony flowing through me i embrace it all as i lie waiting for life to seize me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/18/2016 9:30:00 AM
nice to see this one again
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Date: 12/5/2015 5:56:00 PM
:) SKAT
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Date: 9/12/2013 8:48:00 AM
Zahara, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Zahara Khan
Date: 9/13/2013 12:57:00 AM
thanks skat! :)
Date: 9/10/2013 10:03:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Zahara ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Zahara Khan
Date: 9/10/2013 10:31:00 AM
hello anne! am sure i will love it here at P-SOUP! will start reading others poems too... :D
Date: 9/10/2013 9:11:00 AM
Hi Zahara,,, thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Zahara Khan
Date: 9/10/2013 10:30:00 AM
thnx linda! feels good to be welcomed.. looks like u've been here from quite sometime.. will start reading ur poems.. cheers! :)

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