Blazing Eagles

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Was this a Dream or Reality?

Blazing Eagles soaring across a moonless midnight sky Black glowing talons of ember ripping dark Souls apart Squawking, quenching thirst from the river of tears I cry Flaming beaks devour Eternal Love from a Broken Heart Blazing Eagles nest in the fire pit of a living Hell With a morsel of a sinful Heart unable to Love Smoldering eaglets pecking, eating the soul of the shell This Broken Heart will never see Eternity above Blazing Eagles pay homage to a god that is not mine My Soul will burn in Satan’s hell until the end of time The brilliance of Heaven’s Glory for me will never shine I am a Blazing Eagle in the midnight of my prime I live; death and sorrow for Eons of Forevermore In pain and agony I live without my LOVE LENORE

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/23/2015 6:04:00 PM

I chose this one to read because it said that it is a sonnet but I am glad that I did chose it..I enjoyed reading this one..Hell is a terrible place prepared for the Devil and all His Angels but is being enlarged because so many are rejecting the One True God..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..I had forgotten that I had written that one..LOL..Senior moment..Sara

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 6/13/2015 8:08:00 PM

Dear Exegratio > I have missed you. Love your poem....always about your love for Lenore. I sure hope you are well. Great to see your other poem featured on the front page. Hope you are still cooking Hugs, SuZ

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/9/2015 9:46:00 AM

great to see you again, liege...so touched by this mellow piece.. huggs

Skat A

Date: 5/23/2015 2:05:00 AM

Daniel, wonderful to see this one from you. I'm deeply moved. Hugs* SKAT

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/18/2015 4:03:00 AM

I have always been a big fan of your work...this poem is simply amazing...."I am a Blazing Eagle in the midnight of my prime " - such a triumphant sight!! I am intrigued by this one..the intensity.. the rawness of passion and agony... breathtaking... Always, Laura

James Peranteau

Date: 3/26/2015 8:25:00 AM

P.S.....I do share your reality dear Fellow, and find no pleasure, cept in write...much love, james

James Peranteau

Date: 2/24/2015 9:18:00 AM

My dear poetic friend;..... and six months later, you resurrect ! Thankfully, mine thirst for your writes has led me to this write of yours sir, and thankfully I peeked in ! The pain I feel in this write...enhanced for your LOVE LENORE, moves me. And you well know my friend, that Jehovah will resurrect you to your Love Lenore ! Have a blessed week my friend....much love, james

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/5/2015 12:48:00 PM

This is too sad for me but stands to evidence of your talent. so glad you are still writing. Love, Joyce (Mom)

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/5/2015 12:45:00 PM

Thoughts of Poe flood the mind as I read your spirited, imaginative and colorful ramblings of the soul. Emile. #7