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Blanket of Happy

I wish I had magic to take away her sad A blanket of happy to drape over her shoulders Warming her spirit turning her solemn day glad Sometimes darkness rolls over us like boulders Each of us possesses a special gift to share A blanket of happy to drape over her shoulders When a mood comes we can feel full of despair I have spent many days on darkened doorways Each of us possesses a special gift to share Each word I send is sprinkled with light rays My friend does not need to stay where I've been I have spent many days on darkened doorways Let her soar amidst natures happy scene My happy thoughts flow across a calm sea My friend does not need to stay where I've been It may not be enough yet I give a part of me My happy thoughts flow across a calm sea I wish I had magic to take away her sad Warming her spirit turning her solemn day glad

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Date: 6/16/2018 4:44:00 PM
Richard, your message to Eileen shows you true heart. This terzarelle poem a form you just taught me about. Thanks for education. Wonderful, and no one need to stay where you'd been, tho we all go there.
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Date: 5/9/2014 12:26:00 PM
Having me a good cry just now....This blanket is much needed, Richard. Thanks
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/9/2014 3:36:00 PM
I am amazed that you think you have lost your dream. From my perspective it is merely a matter of you pursuing it. You have the talent you just need to put a plan in motion to move towards it. When it comes to poetry soup this is not the venue to become recognized, it is a place to hone our writing skills.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/9/2014 12:39:00 PM
Too much pressure....Work wise, family commitment wise....big events coming up. I'm just so not up to anything taxing. I've become a bit of a recluse. I'm worried....At times...I just don't see that light at the end of the tunnel...A big BIG cause of my pain is my writing....It's hard to lose a dream...I can't bear it...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/9/2014 12:35:00 PM
What had happened Eileen? Sorry to hear you are sad.
Date: 5/9/2014 12:25:00 PM
Having me a good cry just now....This blanket is much needed, Richard. Thanks
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Date: 12/1/2013 4:59:00 PM
this is beautiful...I would love to trade my blanket in for this one filled with magic and warmth... thank you Richard :) hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/1/2013 6:46:00 PM
My pleasure Sandra, you deserve a nice cozy blanket.
Date: 11/30/2013 2:34:00 PM
:) Grabbing another blanket.......
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Date: 10/13/2013 11:04:00 PM
I covered myself with this blanket this morning, Richard. I am warm and happy again...thank you! :) Your poetry speaks to me.....Always has...ALWAYS will! :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/14/2013 8:26:00 AM
Thanks Eileen. If you are feeling cold feel free to grab as many blanket as you require.
Date: 9/15/2013 6:34:00 PM
I feel so elevated by these beautiful lines Richard ! Sometimes I hate myself ( why did I miss this poem ? ) I should be the first one to leave my comment s..just kidding( I am the 9th visitor ) Magnificent write !
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/14/2013 8:28:00 AM
You should not hate yourself Red, especialy when the one who made you loves you so much. HugsRick
Date: 9/15/2013 3:11:00 PM
Beautifully crafted Richard. I was perusing this poem of yours just yesterday and I liked how you developed this piece. Overall a good read Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/14/2013 8:29:00 AM
Thanks Mustapha.
Date: 9/14/2013 6:52:00 AM
outstanding write Richard glad I read it def a 7 Shadow x smile
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/14/2013 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Shadow! :0)
Date: 9/14/2013 12:48:00 AM
this is so sweet, Richard. I think you are one of the poets who likes to use this form a lot? If not, you should do it a lot because it becomes you!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/14/2013 6:36:00 AM
Yes I do enjoy this form, it is kind of like excercise for the mind. Sometimes difficult to carry a coherent thought from beginning to end which is actualy the beginning again.
Date: 9/14/2013 12:47:00 AM
First, Richard, don't feel bad. You are still six years behind ME now. Let me read this poem!!
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Date: 9/13/2013 11:27:00 PM
Richard.....a beautiful terzanelle that is sprinkled with beauty and light, bringing joy to the heart.....what a dream of a poem ...The sun is out in full force... :-D
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/14/2013 2:18:00 AM
:) I'm glad too!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/13/2013 11:47:00 PM
Glad I could add some sunshine to your day Eileen.
Date: 9/13/2013 9:14:00 PM
Nicely penned Terzanelle, Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/13/2013 11:48:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Ram

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