Blanket of Fog

thick blanket of fog smothers visibility -- cars pile up

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Chuck Novotny

Date: 3/16/2012 11:03:00 PM

Ah, fog. That chaste cousin to the scourge oof cities. Nice piece. - Chuck

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/2/2012 7:44:00 AM

It is always a pleasure to read your poetry Kim. I want to thank you today for your kind words on my writing. Your words are appreciated more then you know. Love, Carol

Jack Horne

Date: 1/20/2012 2:43:00 PM

Love this haiku, Kim. Many congrats to you too, my friend : )

Don Johnson

Date: 1/18/2012 4:07:00 PM

nature takes its course, unforgiven...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2012 5:53:00 PM

oh yes, now that is a haiku with a natural consequence.haha. Let me go see your other one!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/14/2012 5:59:00 AM

That is a sad one but well written..I hope that no one was hurt..Thanks for stopping by..I think that I have a cold..Sara

Judy Ball

Date: 1/13/2012 9:01:00 AM

That's for sure. I've seen it so thick you couldn't see more than a foot in front of you. At times like that it's best nnot to drive. God Bless, JB

Greg Stanley

Date: 1/11/2012 11:21:00 PM

Kim, a wonderful haiku. Reminds so much of the mornings here in southern CA, Greg