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Blank Canvas

A blank canvas That is me The unmade bed The formaldehyde I can have it all A pure white frame That is me The dissected shark How I suffer for my art Only just begun The paint pallet Untouched, until I paint my eyes Below the brow A shade for an occasion I could follow any path Too young to fret where it leads Against a wall, I start to sleep Aged and flaking That will be me The oak tree evaporated Set in stone, a fountain The zest for life drying A frame stained by hands That will be me The aging process Stained in silent protest Nearing the end The paint flaked Touched, until I paint the wrinkles Now no one wants me A shade of white for an apparition I regret each path Too old to complain, a vault for a tomb The aging process from canvas, from womb

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 2/23/2009 6:31:00 PM
Well done write Nathaniel, I liked the aging process and in all reality, that's the we are..aging.
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Date: 1/12/2009 6:33:00 AM
your so talented.
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Date: 12/11/2008 12:59:00 PM
I really enjoyed this, had a lot of depth, I loved how in the beginning the speaker is the blank canvass... ready to live... but then the poem takes us through the courses and twists and turns that life inevitably gives each of us... and each phase of life is compared to the painting process. The end is beautiful and sad, and leaves the reader really thinking. Brilliant writing, I am faving it. :) God bless, Amy
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Date: 12/11/2008 12:35:00 PM
Magnificent my friend! Shades of the helplessness and hopelessness of Plath... she must be a favourite of yours. '...stained in silent process,' '...the zest for life drying,' ...powerful phrasing. Sylvia will be smiling... Best wishes, Keith
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