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Latoya got her new man now Her new beau, wow He calls her babe!!! Aww I don't see Latoya anymore We used to be like two peas in a pond In those days Well, just a few months ago We were inseparable, girl! Watched movies together, dinner and lunch, shopping Etc Her new man came after my old man Me and my old man, nothing has changed, same s#@t Her new man got her some diamonds for her five fingers, I guess he has the dough Word! Well, me and the story of my rings, trust me there are no diamonds, Is a story of another day My life goes blank

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2015 3:41:00 PM

Sad to lose a friend over something like that!! True story? I enjoyed the read.

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/9/2015 5:46:00 AM

Actually most of my writings are based on true life stories. Thank you Andrea.

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/9/2015 5:45:00 AM

Its true and me my friend are still good friends. I was actually trying to write this in a fun way. You know it has happened, its life and its okay. I actually laugh about it when I read this.

William Gray

Date: 3/8/2015 12:21:00 PM

Enjoyed this piece Njeri!. Best wishes my friend!.

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/9/2015 5:40:00 AM

Thank you so much Bill. I appreciate your visit.