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Blame the Moon

I blame you, moon, for bringing thoughts of love in night to charm my eyes in slumber deep. Dreams drift bewildered in my head above til’ morning seizes passion’s grip from sleep. The moon shines careless on this lonely soul and beckons prey to seek the hunter’s fang. As dark expands in shadows to console, they slice the skin releasing bitter pain. In dreams, I feel a heart beating with mine, a stranger once becomes now all I know. Familiar taste upon my lips like wine flows perfectly from starry tide aglow. How do I live in sunlight’s looming grave, deadened by numbing rays of ruthless sun? How do I live without the arms I crave, amongst the crowds until the day is done? I blame you, moon, for rousing dreams within to taunt me with a lover’s longing smile. Beneath closed lids, I’m lost in timeless spin. Winds whisper, moon, please let her sleep awhile. for Gautami Phookan's Waking Dreams Contest, 12/1/14

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Date: 1/20/2015 10:12:00 AM
You are such a romantic.....and I love that you are blaming the moon in this lovely poem to swoon by !! Congratulations on your win.....it is the best!!
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Date: 1/20/2015 5:23:00 AM
Very intellectual verse well composed, congrats on the win, Rhonda
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Date: 1/19/2015 11:11:00 PM
wow, Rhonda. you never cease to amaze me with your skills. I think the "flavor" of this one was a bit like mine. Gosh, was this contest's theme called Waking dreams?? That does not even fit with the theme of the poem I had on her winner list!! Don't worry about the email reply. I am so busy these days, I should be glad not to get a lot of email during Monday to wednesday when I have my least amount of play time!! hope you enjoyed MLK day!!! Glad to know I surprised ya!!
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Date: 1/19/2015 11:11:00 PM
Oh and a HUGE congrats in this contest.
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Date: 1/19/2015 10:49:00 PM
Lovely Rhonda,, congrats on huge win wid this awesome work!
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Date: 1/19/2015 6:23:00 PM
Beautiful write...Congrats on a great win...
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Date: 1/19/2015 5:06:00 PM
You are so amazing Rhonda. Your poetry is unsurpassed. Congratulations on your win! A Fav!
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Date: 1/19/2015 4:33:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Rhonda:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/19/2015 3:25:00 PM
Hi Rhonda, That was compelling. That was dramatic. That was an enjoyable and beautifully expressed verse. Professionally structured too. Congratulations on your excellent poem and well deserved win. (I'm starting to rate poems. I gave this a 7.) Earl
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Date: 1/19/2015 10:52:00 AM
I love it all Rhonda, from the title to the last line. Wonderful poem. Congratulations on your great win.
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Date: 1/19/2015 9:29:00 AM
Rhonda, congratulations on your 2nd Place win for this lovely, moving poem. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/19/2014 6:08:00 AM
Wow!.. Wow!... Magnificent!... I just, by title, picked a couple of your poems to read this morning, Rhonda, and judging by those two, I can't wait for time to read more! Hugs, my poetic friend... Arlene
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Date: 12/11/2014 12:31:00 PM
Wow! this is lovely Rhonda! The moonlit night can offer so many moments of enchantment; is there a wish to turn them into reality? ...or do you prefer a restful sleep free of dreams? #7 // paul
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Date: 12/2/2014 11:53:00 AM
What an awesome piece! Beautifully done.
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Date: 12/2/2014 8:07:00 AM
Rhonda, A most moving and quite compelling Quatrain write here. I thoroughly enjoyed it. You should win the contest with this poem. The flow and tenor of your verses, to me, are perfect. This one's a "7" from me, and a keeper in my BIG FAV FILE!! Best of Luck in the contest!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 12/1/2014 1:44:00 AM
so beautifully penned Rhonda Good luck:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/1/2014 12:31:00 AM
good luck on the contest, Rhonda, very romantic write.
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