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“A man can fail many times, but he isn't a failure until he begins to blame somebody else.” ~ John Burroughs You say you love the moon but it’s the stars you gaze at, as you stretch your petal-like fingers, to flaunt magical phrases across nocturnal nights~ stealing their florescence within forsaken lights, to make them an unseen reality worth reading, as your charming words protect them from invisible ink, that has been burning empty pages from fiery flames, oblivious to the truth that not every twinkling gem can grant your wishes to flicker caramel gold. Perhaps, you should see the scriptures within lunar spheres, how she carries pain, whilst remaining faithfully as a fairy goddess; beacon of hope when you were in your island of ignorance, speaking the language of dimmed dreams in sentimental silence. So, don’t question her wounded skin reflecting confined absence~ nor blame sizzling stars with her name sewn, in vibrant violet, within the crystalline cage beneath crooning seas. She was never guilty of lethal love, nor were her emotions manipulative games designed for ephemeral pleasures~ she, was in need of a sublime rhyme, that can set her healing heart ablaze, reignite reasons to relive promises made amidst inevitable distance. But if, pain prompted a voice, you’ll feel her bleeding soul, and her aching sight; she’s seen so much of what the dying leaves and falling season could do, yet, the wind never revealed secrets of the sunflower crescent, for her tale was never meant to be told to the weak~ trees with torn twigs, too afraid to translate heartbroken hymns, and eager to place labels on wilted weeds and faded flowers, unaware of the raven runes flowing in fickle hues within their stone cold skin.

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Date: 5/1/2024 8:03:00 AM
IE, this poem seems to me to be a different and inside-out perspective on the contest theme, which is very thought provoking and unusual. You've added a fourth dimension to the concept in question and point out that perhaps we have something wonderful to strive for, but the observer might not think globally and realize there are consequences. The idea you promote...that we should be thoughtful about what we are dealing with in our striving for success...is a philosophical gem. I am actually amazed at what you have done here. This is exactly the sort of thinking that could generate peace in the world. The real judgement of success comes when we take all the effects into account and not just look at what we have done as a single entity. U R AMAZING!!
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Date: 4/12/2024 12:45:00 PM
Congratulations Empress! You are honest with blame, "not every twinkling gem can grant your wishes to flicker caramel gold" luscious. "She was never guilty of lethal love, nor were her emotions manipulative games" resonates. Poetry that holds together through and through, well you make one feel it's worth, justifies! Love can hurt us dear poetess~Anaya
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Date: 4/11/2024 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 4/8/2024 7:28:00 PM
"You say you love the moon but it’s the stars you gaze at." The opening pricked me. Failure is a compulsory process for anything that wants to be great. Love, career, family etc. "how she carries pain, whilst remaining faithfully as a fairy goddess." We could say pain given us wings to fly. Love this lines. Cheers dear Ink.
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Date: 4/8/2024 5:35:00 PM
You write with such impact, Ink. A powerful diction, so many beautiful lines-<3
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Date: 4/8/2024 5:33:00 PM
dearest Ink--your imagery was outstanding--so vivid and deeply symbolic. I love your take on the 'blame' concept for the contest. Your poem was dense, heavy with emotion in lines like this one: too afraid to translate heartbroken hymns, Best wishes with the contest and hugs for this evening, Sara
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Date: 4/8/2024 10:04:00 AM
You say you love the moon but it’s the stars you gaze at, oooo scandalous!!! Love it !! she carries pain, whilst remaining faithfully as a fairy goddess; beacon of hope when you were in your island of ignorance, ooooo that line papiiii… damn it breathes soo much power!!! language of dimmed dreams in sentimental silence. Genius! pain prompted a voice, you’ll feel her bleeding soul,and her aching sight; love the heaviness!! trees with torn twigs,too afraid to translate heartbroken hymns, mmm gorgeous
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Date: 4/8/2024 5:43:00 AM
A splendid dialogue of emotions in your gifted vocabulary, my friend.--So, don’t question her wounded skin reflecting confined absence~ nor blame sizzling stars with her name sewn, in vibrant violet---She was never guilty of lethal love, nor were her emotions manipulative games---her tale was never meant to be told to the weak~ trees with torn twigs, too afraid to translate heartbroken hymns---a FAVE for the splendor of vocabulary, Ink.
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Date: 4/8/2024 5:26:00 AM
A deep and emotive theme for the contest.. The imagery in this poem is rich and vivid, painting a picture of the night sky, stars, and the moon. The moon and stars serve as powerful symbols throughout the poem, representing different facets of love, longing, and resilience. Its a captivating exploration of love, pain, and the resilience of the human spirit. It invites readers to reflect on their own experiences of longing and healing, while also celebrating the beauty and complexity of the natural world.
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Date: 4/8/2024 4:54:00 AM
True words right there
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Date: 4/8/2024 3:17:00 AM
Oh my goodness! This poem is so raw and slicingly beautiful! Right into a Heart that is unaware from a Heart that is bleedingly softly aware, who has seen so much !. I hear your Soulsong, Beloved Ink Empress. I always enjoy how you end your poems. They have this powerful detachment feel, yet without being detached. Truly you have a clear strong knowing of what is truth and what is false. U r exquisite ! I resonate with your writing so much. ThkU too for your comment on my write. Love you stax.
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Date: 4/8/2024 2:26:00 AM
- Woow, Ink ... the truth will always come out - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/8/2024 2:11:00 AM
Your poem, studded with magnificent metaphors, not to mention imagery, gave me the ephemeral pleasure of poetry. Great poetry and best for a win. Hugs.
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