Get Your Premium Membership

Blackjack Dealer Named Whitney

There’s a wanna-be boxer named Whitney, Who deals blackjack in Atlantic City. I said with a straight face, “That you’ll never win, ace.” And then foolishly told him to hit me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/11/2014 8:55:00 PM
Nicely written. I used to deal blackjack in Atlantic City myself.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/2/2014 10:32:00 PM
haha, Love to see a good limerick!
Login to Reply
Date: 1/1/2014 7:48:00 PM
what a hoot David so funny ty for visiting my work Shadow x smile hug
Login to Reply
Date: 1/1/2014 5:46:00 PM
Very good one ...I am inspired to do one in this same vein myself..best wishes
Login to Reply
Date: 1/1/2014 1:22:00 PM
lol, good one! I read the title and wondered what could rhyme with Whitney
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs