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Blackhawk Dawn

In rugged mountains of beige A mission has been set To rid a faction of rebels Where conflict will be met Eradication To return a country to good Dispose of the unwanted For the feud to conclude Near the Helmand River valley A major offensive is set U.S. Marine push Juniors and Vets Its not even daylight As i radio them in Colleagues of three Hereford's unique fighting men In our covered position The Taliban are sighted Car bombings, slaughter Rotor blades we invited A distant sound Of birds of war Bringing Marines Bullets, hard gore From the valley rises Western army brawn In formation flight Blackhawk Dawn http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/war-5.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/3/2010 11:44:00 AM
Happy Easter to you and yours James. Love Carol and Family
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Date: 4/2/2010 7:59:00 PM
Laura is right, yu should be writing us a novel, each piece of prose leaves us wanting continuation
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Date: 4/2/2010 12:39:00 PM
James~ You should write a fiction novel I love your adventures side a great feat here my friend keep wowing us! Laura :)
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Date: 4/2/2010 12:21:00 PM
Great good over evil write in this one..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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