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Blackened Silhouettes Fill the Skies

Blackened silhouettes fill the skies Take heed to coming wind and rain. Listen to the swirling gull cries No chance of weighing anchor now My ship’s the schooner Laurie Jane With a Neptune sprite at the bow. We’re for Sumatra come first chance A fine load of tea ours to gain Waiting to sail is a dog’s dance Now such heinous blackened skies rain. 6-15-18

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Date: 6/30/2018 11:13:00 AM
Congratulations, Alfred, on your great 2nd place win.. Lovely poem with great imagery ..Hugs Eve ~`*
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Alfred Berggren
Date: 6/30/2018 12:14:00 PM
Thanks, Eve.
Date: 6/29/2018 9:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, Alfred - blessings and best wishes for continued success, my friend! :-)
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Alfred Berggren
Date: 6/30/2018 9:58:00 AM
Thanks, Gregory.
Date: 6/29/2018 5:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your imagery fit your theme perfectly. :)
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Alfred Berggren
Date: 6/29/2018 8:08:00 PM
Thanks, Susan.
Date: 6/29/2018 6:54:00 AM
great last line dear Alfred, loved your poem ,thank you for your entry and congratulations on your placement. Be blessed, -luloo :)
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Alfred Berggren
Date: 6/29/2018 10:40:00 AM
Thanks, Laura.
Date: 6/16/2018 5:09:00 PM
Great one Alfred. I like the line: waiting to sail is a dog's dance :)
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Alfred Berggren
Date: 6/29/2018 10:41:00 AM
Thanks,Heidi, for dropping by and leaving a note.

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