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Black Train

That big black train is coming; You feel those deep vibrations. It’s coming for you darling, And all your sweet creations. It knows all your sorrows; It knows all your sins. And when it comes for you, There’s no doubt you will give in. You see its glaring light, Blinding deep into your soul. It will hypnotize your mind; The pain will take its toll. You know there’s no escaping. There’s nowhere for you to run. For when you see it coming, You will soon be done. That big black train is coming, And you’re waiting on the tracks. You know you’ve lost the battle; There’s no chance of turning back.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/29/2015 8:34:00 PM
Hi Danielle, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/29/2015 4:43:00 AM
- Hey Danielle :) - Welcome with your first great poem here on P- Soup - Hope your stay will give you much pleasure - I've been here since 11/26/2011 ....... it is a pleasure to share poems and read what others write - I wish you good luck :) - Nice to "meet" you :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/28/2015 9:40:00 PM
Danielle, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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