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Black Tears

BLACK TEARS … . ………. .. in this midnight chill black tears pour at will ~ ~ a limping rose on window sill ~life scattered, such bitter pill ~ ~ wafting air of prayers to fill her stormy eyes~~ hang so still ~then scent so light blows from hill as new breath feels fresh thrill ~ ~ …………….. monorhyme © all rights reserved Contest: Brian Stand's Whatevr Any Theme By: nette onclaud

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Kash Poet

Date: 11/10/2011 6:39:00 AM

Congrats Nette on your 1st place win in Brian's contest.Enjoyed.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/9/2011 4:31:00 PM

Congrats Nette luv on a fantastic first place win my friend...luv..

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/9/2011 7:29:00 AM

Well done and congratulations on your win. Love, joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/9/2011 5:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Whatever"contest Nette. Love, Carol

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 9/14/2011 12:54:00 PM

Awesome monorhyme,Nette.Congratulations on your well deserved win...

Nick Bagnall

Date: 9/14/2011 7:46:00 AM

Oh, thats a sad one, full of loss and despair. very good write.

Tahera Mannan

Date: 9/14/2011 12:02:00 AM

An amazing write Nette. Haunting and lovely. Many congrats dear friend.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/13/2011 8:46:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of constance, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/13/2011 3:33:00 PM

CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON SECOND PLACE WIN WITH THIS GORGEOUS POETRY MY FRIEND.. OH SO WONDERFUL WORDS..

Bob Quigley

Date: 9/13/2011 10:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this special piece nette.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 9/13/2011 8:55:00 AM

Congrats on your win, nette. Excellent piece. Thanks for your comments on my recent postings. Best to you and yours. luv Ralph

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/13/2011 8:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Six Lines Of Poetry, Please" contest Nette. Love,Carol

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/12/2011 2:18:00 PM

Hi! Friend, how are you? I know sweetest well. Three corners tie where my love lie. Thanks for sharing and for your comment. bl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/12/2011 10:51:00 AM

oh how intriguing and enchanting these lines are Nette luv.. Constance will drool over am sure as I am... splendid my friend..good luck luv..

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/11/2011 9:20:00 PM

Charismatic feel to this amazing verse. Love the images.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/11/2011 4:12:00 PM

chilling! light & love

Daver Austin

Date: 9/11/2011 1:42:00 PM

Black tears and resulting black rose. This creates quite a mood. Great write. Love, daver

Kash Poet

Date: 9/11/2011 12:56:00 PM

Beautifully expressed lines depicting the anguish of mind.Your Title is very appropriate .Liked this beauty from you.Come:)

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/11/2011 12:40:00 PM

OH nette! This is one of your best poems...I thoroughly enjoyed it immensely! It's a wonderful write!! You'll do very well in the contest!!