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black rose

 
To you black rose 
Look deep into the center 
Their you will find 
in the very inner depths 
colourless beauty 

From a pack of lies swearing
Left with the thorns 
scratching my inner body 
In agony 
I howl 

Killing me slowly your insults
Eating the soul out of me 
coloured dark lies fading light
Shades inner beauty 

In the depth 
my heart cold 
ice chilled by the inner you
My dungeon hell 
has no fury 

My rose 
for you black 
Left on this page 
The heart's colour 

With a kiss 
Goodbye black 
Magic with love 
Turns colours 
beautiful

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  1. Date: 8/16/2015 12:58:00 AM
    Liam, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soup's home page :). **

  1. Date: 8/13/2015 1:39:00 PM
    i dig this poem. Thank you.

  1. Date: 8/11/2015 5:41:00 PM
    LIAM.. Your fabulous write is featured this week on the Soup homepage.. Huge congrats and the tip of my hat! -LYRIC

  1. Date: 10/25/2014 9:54:00 PM
    Liam great poem and awesome last verse it is very well put together and love it's emotional content of the whole poem, cheri Thank you also for your comments on my works

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 10/26/2014 2:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    cherl thank you so deeply pal heart touching wonderful comment your works great i love reading your stories dear friend bless you
  1. Date: 10/25/2014 1:03:00 PM
    Very good last stanza!

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 10/25/2014 1:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you ever so kindly dan
  1. Date: 10/23/2013 12:42:00 PM
    iam, CONGRATS in Giorgio's awesome "Gothic or Romantic contest" enjoy your day.................... LOVE -- SKAT

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 7:59:00 AM
    Congrats on the win in the contest, liam

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 10:01:00 PM
    liam, love the win...PD

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 10:24:00 PM
    A kiss will take all the darkness away! If only it were that simple for this world!It is amazing how far one act of love goes to change the color of a heart. I love your take on the black rose. Quite resilient, this one is, Always, Laura

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/13/2013 11:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    WITH THE RIGHT ONE IT WOULD LIGHT UP THE NIGHT WONDERFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/4/2013 1:06:00 AM
    Awhile ago i was thinking of writing about a black rose...but i never died..Black rose of torment and pain..Maybe mourning petals have withered by now..and one can see colours again..Splash me a rainbow of petals..and voila..black has gone to hell

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/13/2013 10:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    HA HA CHARMAINE ALWAYS BEAUTIFUL IN COMMENT I THANK YOU KINDLY DEEPLY APPRECIATED
    Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 9/4/2013 1:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I never did i meant..Oops of course not inever died..Otherwise how am i here : )
  1. Date: 8/8/2013 12:41:00 PM
    a good poem enjoyed reading Shadow x smiles

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 8/23/2013 5:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    linda thank you ever so kindly deeply appreciated
  1. Date: 8/4/2013 9:58:00 PM
    Liam, beauty belongs to every color around... thank you for the awesome, turn around, when the word black take place... hello, new and beautiful chapter... xox~ Linda

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 8/5/2013 4:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU KINDLY FOR THE BEAUTIFUL COMMENT LINDA STILL FINDING IT HARD TO NAVIGATE THIS SITE FEEL A BIT LOST THANKS AGAIN